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Assignment 5: Tutor Feedback & Changes for Assessment

This submission consists of six A4 prints.

The original Assignment consisted of seven, but Elaine was removed following a discussion with my tutor.

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Elaine, Pagan Artist, Staffordshire

While the other images show people with their full attention directed upon their chosen spiritual activity and space, this image contained a different gaze, that of looking directly at the camera and so broke the continuity of the work.  Other images on the contact sheet were assessed but found not to be suitable and the submission presented for Assessment is stronger as a set of six images.

My tutor’s feedback can be found here.

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